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You where a young country, 5 years old to be exact and you lived in Holy Rome's house with Mr. Austria, Ms. Hungary, and little Italy. It has been years sense Holy Rome been in war. When he left you and Italy got closer to each other. Everyone thought he was a girl but Ms. Hungary, even you did. You loved to play dress up with "her". That was until you and Italy got older, everyone( but Hungry because she already knew) found out that he was a boy. Mr. Austria was surprised,even you. Mr. Austria dress him up in boy clothes. You got use to it after a while and developed a crush on the little Italian boy.

Ms.Hungry and Mr. Austria decided to give you and Italy ball room dances. So when you got older you both knew how to ball room dance. But said you two where to young to dance at the party's.

There was a ball room dance coming up and Mr.Austria told you both you can go just stay close to each other. About a week passed and the ball room dance was well decorated. Italy was wearing a tuxedo and you wore a pretty dress( you can image what it looked like). Italy, like always walked up to the snack table and put lots of food on his plate and helped you get your food. You looked at his plate and it has a lot of pasta on it.

"Italy, why do you have all that pasta? Doesn't that stuff make you fat?"

"I love pasta! And no not to me. When I lived with grandpa Rome I ate it all the time."

After you can Italy ate you watched everybody dance.

"I wish we can dance out there...It's been my dream to..."

"Maybe we can!" Italy took your hand and slowly walked you to the dance floor.

"Wait! Mr.Austria told us we are to young to dance." You shouted.

"But I want to make yours dreams come true!"  

You blushed at what he said and stared dancing with you. You both stared to dance to the center and everyone made a circle and watched as the romantic music started to play.  
im so sorry its so short! Dx i ran out of ideas :( if you have any ideas on what to put more then ill make it longer unless you think its good short xD (i dont! :( and also i think i might have an idea to make it a little longer! so wait for updates! )

its been a while sense i posed a country x reader mainly because im busy with The Awesome P and A Show and im working so many at the same time im working on my 2nd England x Reader ill try to post that one soon

***UPDATE***
December 11th 2012
omg thank you guys so much for all the faves! ^^ i will write more stories for you guys! :)

**UPDATE**
6/1/2014
I edit some stuff.

story(C) me
Hetalia(C) Hidekaz .H
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:iconapplewhite210:
applewhite210 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  New member Student Artist
kawaaiii~~~~~!!!
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vocaloidsrcool Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
He is such a sweet heart! <3 I honestly love him. :iconvenezianoplz:
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EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like what you're doing here, but the grammar mistakes and spelling errors made it less enjoyable for me. And Austria is the one that didn't know he was a boy. Hungary knew, she just kept it quiet.
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Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have dyslexia so I can`t help with the spelling and yes, I know that.
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EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I didn't know that. I'm sorry.
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Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that fine but I can look back at it and fix stuff that I missed 
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Meepilybuff Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
... There is no country of "Hungry." :icondeathglareplz:

Other than that typo, this was a really good story.
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TheWhaleDreamer Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
As long as I have my computer Mkay Austria *gets grounded earlier (doesn't have said computer)*  k then I guess I'm getting ma way then
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MomoMomone12 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
F you Austria I'M CALLIN' INDEPENDENCE >:U (ah-ha jk? dun't hurt meh)
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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:iconxioitalyprux3:
XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconhottygirl101:
hottygirl101 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student General Artist
update plz!!!
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student General Artist
and then, Mr. England yelled, "BLOODY WANKERS!" as you and Italy danced the night away. The The End ^^
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HetaliaLover696969 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
It'd be so uncool if he seperated us with his browbeams... :iconbrowbeamsplz:
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:iconresidentevilhetalia:
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student General Artist
I know right...
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hetaliabritian Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
cute
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WaterdragonTonx94 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awww so sweet screw mr Aurstria :D
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Necessity4fun Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww~ Lovely *A* Dancing with Italy~~ >////<
Waiting for the rest ^^
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i did!? fruuu! D< stupid ipod =.=
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Necessity4fun Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
eh?I don't get it~
I'm going to guess that comment wasn't for me XD
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no i wrote the story on my ipod
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Necessity4fun Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah got it now XD (Slow person here)
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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ZEMYX-ALWAYS Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
This is lovely. But something was bugging me in it in some parts you wrote Australia instead of Austria
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i balme my ipod! D<
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ZEMYX-ALWAYS Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Curses autocorrect
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VillainKomandr Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
You misspelled *Doesn't (when you are asking Feli if the food will make him fat) you put Docent* [a collage/university teacher]
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks...
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VillainKomandr Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Your welcome.
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MiyuraWindsong Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*You're <3
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VillainKomandr Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
:3 oh well... spelling is not one of my strengths.
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MiyuraWindsong Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It's okay... Being you is your best strength ever~!
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C4--Frosty Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
x3 so cute~ aha, this was amazing. some errors (id know, honestly... im an editor :D), but overall great~ and screw what Mr. A said, me and Italy shall do what we want! (except for that, if yknow what me means. ;3 :3 x3)
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Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! ^^
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C4--Frosty Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ywelcome~
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thebestbeastlove Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Um where is the story?
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
um...your on it
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sisssssters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
noo Mr. Austria is going to kill me :0
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:iconitaly-pastalove:
Italy-PastaLove Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D:
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